Crospic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elon Musk Reveals The Model P]

Pretty cool.

Bingleheimer responds:

thanks!

[Sleep Potatoes]

After watching the entire film, I don't think it's fair that you are not getting a proper critique. Especially how you worked very hard on this film. Like 2 years?! That is some commitment!! I'll first point out all the things that are good about it.
1. The pacing of the film is done to perfection.
2. I like how you tried to make it look 3D.
3. Voice acting was excellent.
4. Some parts were ambitious, like the dreaming part.
5. Your commitment.

But of course, I'm not that type of person that thinks that everything is good about it, and those who disagree must burn in a furnace!
I can understand why people aren't really appreciating the work.

First of all, the story is cliche. I don't think a family documentation is worthy of a story: Especially when it is 30 minutes long.
Something that is cliche can translate to boring. This quite possibly means that many people didn't stick around to watch the whole thing.

Characters are okay: I guess people just find it that way.

The film is long but simple: There is not much to say about it honestly.
But don't feel let down, just do the things you enjoy doing!

Good luck

SuperCodeman responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I'll take it the advice by heart, writing really isn't my strongest point so I should try focus on that.

[Battle for Goldshire ZX]

the first movie posted in 2001...
14 years old...

🤔

Orangebeef responds:

mad?

[Robin Williams vs Will Smith Animatic 2.3 | Cartoon Fight Club | Sick Animation Bro]

5/5 animatic was very clear. If you send this to someone, they will pick it up quickly.

SickAnimationBro responds:

Thanks a lot! :D

[Doughnut lol]

Honestly, this is more suitable as a GIF.
It's alright though.

SnootAnon responds:

I was planning on doing that, but it also had audio that went along with it, so I just uploaded it as a .swf. Good to know it came out alright tho.

[Short : Stick Scarf Combo]

Pretty good.
Animation needs working on though.
Also, try and add in your own background.

KenAnimates responds:

i will make it myself next video

[Iron Man vs. Captain America and Winter Soldier]

Great Job! The animation is good!
One thing I should say is you should put dialogue boxes to show who is speaking.

KiloLee responds:

Thanks!
The assumption was that if you have already seen the movie, you would realize immediately who was who.
But I will definitely consider this tip on future projects.

[Speedy Boi]

It's nice. Good.

MandoAnimation responds:

Thanks . <3